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WOMEN & CHILDREN FIRST

.

'ah look at that wee lass crying'

a scots woman says from

the far end of a bench

I sat on to catch my breath

my held back tears

now let spill in dim light

after reading the list

of projected names

.

50% children lost

80% men perished

3 of 12 dogs survived

97% first class women

sat in first class seats

on half filled life boats

.

I watch a child on his knees

zoom make believe ships

on see through glass that

separates our world

from theirs in an

animated wreckage

.

On a visit to the Titanic Museum in Belfast at the weekend. I found it strange that I was the only one crying, how could I not.

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I would have been right there crying with you! I love your poem, Treasa. "Make believe ships / on see through glass that / separates our world / from theirs in an / animated wreckage." What stirring and gorgeous lines!

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Thanks so much Lisa. I would have offered you a tissue.

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The story of the Titanic always gets to me, too.

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This is very tender and powerful, Treasa. . How could we not cry?

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I love this. Are the Titantic Museums there like ours in the USA - we have what is essentially a tourist destination type museum in Branson, MO and in TN. I found it a bit disturbing that their plight was our entertainment when we went.

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The museum in Belfast is situated on the dock where the Titanic was originally built, a lot of the museum focuses on the local workers and their craftsmanship. I skipped the gift shop. The building in Branson with the iceberg stuck to the side seems a bit distasteful, but awareness and education can't be a bad thing either.

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