I love the history you conjure for us -- looking around this special room and feeling your past selves and dreams, held by the slowly-emerging present. Beautiful use of rhyme, too: "Here we learned the mystery of the grey / that seeped into our lives, day by day." and "still they come to bring us breathless at last, / the sacred circles of the dreamers' past." Rhyme gives these lines extra power!
I love the history you conjure for us -- looking around this special room and feeling your past selves and dreams, held by the slowly-emerging present. Beautiful use of rhyme, too: "Here we learned the mystery of the grey / that seeped into our lives, day by day." and "still they come to bring us breathless at last, / the sacred circles of the dreamers' past." Rhyme gives these lines extra power!
I love the history you conjure for us -- looking around this special room and feeling your past selves and dreams, held by the slowly-emerging present. Beautiful use of rhyme, too: "Here we learned the mystery of the grey / that seeped into our lives, day by day." and "still they come to bring us breathless at last, / the sacred circles of the dreamers' past." Rhyme gives these lines extra power!
Thank you Rebekah! I am not much of a rhymer, but it was fun to have this seep out!