Karri, this is nice. I, also, like your use of color and shades intersperced with the reality of lives. These two lines are real gems:
"All the colors of the rainbow dumped at once into any given moment."
and
"The colors can be sorted back out again."
Given the conext of your thematics in the poem, these two lines are especially powerful. You have a wonderful poem, wtether you choose to keep tinkering or not!
Karri, this is nice. I, also, like your use of color and shades intersperced with the reality of lives. These two lines are real gems:
"All the colors of the rainbow dumped at once into any given moment."
and
"The colors can be sorted back out again."
Given the conext of your thematics in the poem, these two lines are especially powerful. You have a wonderful poem, wtether you choose to keep tinkering or not!