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Hi Lisa! Great poem! Living on a working farm sure brings it joyous noise. I loved the prompt too. This was in my ears all afternoon —

Turn Over

If they crank that engine

one more time it’ll crack.

I expect tractors, songbirds,

perhaps even the squeal of foxes.

Back behind the barn

my neighbor and his son

wrangle with their stubborn

early seventies F-100.

Obviously this horse has been

flogged beyond repair.

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I love how you brought so many farm sounds to life here! It’s not quite as quiet as some might expect, is it? Thank you so much for sharing this!

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Love it! As one who had a dad who was cleanly working on cars, trucks, etc those are familiar sounds indeed!

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As an early seventies model myself, I felt for the F-100 (and also for you, hearing its near-death rattle over and over).

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They got it running yesterday and it only made it to “almost” the top of the eighth of a mile driveway. Not sure about its future.

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