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This is definitely another poem that I would love to hear as spoken work (and almost feel like I can). I always love your rhythm and rhyming, and I think it serves this poem well.

I especially love the part about fear doubling - which itself has a double meaning, as their fear feeds and is fed by the fear of their followers, and continues to grow.

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Thank you, A. I've been having so much fun lately with the rhyming. I guess I go through phases where I'm really feeling it. It makes some inner kid part of self very happy :))

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