This is lovely, Karri. The repetition of "sitting / on the side / of a hill" and the way you break that into three spacious lines makes reading the poem feel so calm, restful, and unhurried . . . a perfect fit for its theme!
This is lovely, Karri. The repetition of "sitting / on the side / of a hill" and the way you break that into three spacious lines makes reading the poem feel so calm, restful, and unhurried . . . a perfect fit for its theme!
This is lovely, Karri. The repetition of "sitting / on the side / of a hill" and the way you break that into three spacious lines makes reading the poem feel so calm, restful, and unhurried . . . a perfect fit for its theme!