I can see that layering, both with the reference to the salt grain(s) and being in an appointment with a cardiovascular surgeon (?). I can relate to appearing "fine" or being assessed as "fine" and feeling really UNfine...this has been the case for me with various behavioral health diagnoses over many years. I love how cleverly your poem captures the dissonance.
I can see that layering, both with the reference to the salt grain(s) and being in an appointment with a cardiovascular surgeon (?). I can relate to appearing "fine" or being assessed as "fine" and feeling really UNfine...this has been the case for me with various behavioral health diagnoses over many years. I love how cleverly your poem captures the dissonance.
I can see that layering, both with the reference to the salt grain(s) and being in an appointment with a cardiovascular surgeon (?). I can relate to appearing "fine" or being assessed as "fine" and feeling really UNfine...this has been the case for me with various behavioral health diagnoses over many years. I love how cleverly your poem captures the dissonance.
Yes! I decided to name the poem "cardiology."
Love it <3