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Lisa Jensen's avatar

This is beautiful. I love “let tree be ground be sky” and then that gut punch of an ending.

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Keith Aron's avatar

"We who summoned the roaring." That lands as some sort of heavy, yet liberating truth for me. Perhaps we summon the roaring to seek liberation on some darkly magical level. Here's what came to me out of your invitation to play with internal weather:

***

The low pressure front

settled silently as ash

in November’s dismal aftermath.

Smothering hope and suffocating freedom,

smashing illusions of easy breathing.

Then, it shifted.

Lifted and thickened.

Suspended, like a bank of clouds

Looming swollen, swarming and loud

with locusts.

A shelf to be stooped under

to avoid banging my head.

Still, It drops a millimeter here,

a centimeter there,

incrementally stoking my dread.

I feel the encroachment of its approach

Pulsing behind my eyes, aching in my face.

Pressing, oppressing, depressing

every last one of us,

Noxious and nebulous.

But the sun cannot be snuffed,

and this maleficence

is perhaps and probably ephemeral,

merely an eclipse

of a more enduring magnificence.

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