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Rebekah Jensen's avatar

I loved this post so much and, as you already know because I told you so offline (sister's advantage), this might be my all-time favorite poem of yours! The prompt was lovely and, while I didn't mean to be a copycat by "enjoying" a stovetop activity of my own, that is what ended up happening.

Say, if anyone knows computers/programming, can you tell me if my metaphor in the last three lines works? I was kinda winging it.

Failed Grilled Cheese

Can I do

just one thing

let alone

no thing?

It takes two emails

to grill a sandwich

one per side

or two word games

when I’m playing

hooky

But today I went

screenless, made myself

stand still with my spatula

feeling dull

but not exactly

impatient, more like

resigned.

My eyes

had two choices:

the task at hand

or just past that

(not exactly cheating)

the smeared, crumb-ridden

stovetop that signified

future work

I chose the latter, naturally

and used my spatula

too much

fussing my sandwich

around the pan

before it was cured

so that it partially

molted, and with its

bread-skin compromised

lost its secret inner world

of mayo and pesto

and pickles and

cheese and

became something

more like a

casserole

I ate it and

it was delicious

but what is the lesson?

Resume my normal

protocol of

parenthetical lunch prep

barely tapping

the brakes on my day?

Try again with the

dull method,

keep paring down

until I am One with

sandwich? Give up

and switch to cereal?

Or become a

faithful naturalist

of my own mind, track

--with curiosity only—

its comings and goings

its sparks and sputters

and how its ancient program

performs on an

all-new platform

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

This Moment

Dark, cold winter night,

when all seems quiet and still,

I listen.

The owls in conversant song

Lead me wondering if their music is calming,

a plea for sanity,

or the gossip of the day.

Across Nick’s meadow is the lope of deer,

graceful dancers of the dark,

vanishing into the forest that frames

this octagon bowl of space.

The scurry of a marauding racoon,

fresh from their night’s thievery;

A scowling gaze warning me to stay back.

Shooting star paints the sky,

cosmic etch-a-sketch

that inspires poets to pen.

Slow meandering skunk crawls along

confident in its defenses and protection

from the likes of me.

We stand safe in our mutual avoidance of conflict.

I wish for northern lights,

rainbow symphony that expands

our hopes for a new beginning.

And I stop, conscious of how often

I wish for even more…

I hear a small whisper from the night spirits,

“enjoy this moment.”

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