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Chuck's avatar

brief.

fleeting.

momentary.

passing.

short-lived.

temporary.

transient.

don't pin its wings down.

for all to see.

but maybe find your glasses.

for you to see.

Another be still and know god wink.

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Keith Aron's avatar

I love how you manage to begin with a very poetic gluteal reference (the cleft between high hills of pillow basalt, aka butt cheeks, in this reader's imagination) and end with your ass (and I love all the playful, colorful images between, too)! Thank you for this very fun poem and prompt :)). Here's what I came up with:

There you were,

as if you’d always been,

and would always be,

perched on the prosaic power line

just a window away from me.

As if you weren’t just

a flicker of divinity,

a blue blaze

pointing the way

out of

February’s monotony.

Your caramel belly

puffed round against the chill,

your blue back

bobbing on that wire

as if it were the sea

you swiveled your sweet head,

watching me

watch you

fly off,

leaving no trace,

except an imprint

of your evanescent grace.

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