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Lisa Jensen's avatar

Since sharing my poem above, I've been thinking that it doesn't adequately hold the tension between the strange beauty of the Helene-induced fairy rings in Kentucky and the devastation and loss in Florida, Georgia, and the Carolinas. That was all in my heart as I was writing the poem, but I don't feel like the words reflect it clearly enough. So here's an updated draft . . . and I am sure there will be more updates to come, even if they don't get shared here! If anyone wants to share feedback on the differences between the drafts, that's certainly appreciated. I have lots of room for learning and growing.

Somewhere over the Atlantic,

the sky picked up the ocean,

held it high,

and together they spun.

Somewhere under Appalachian soil,

mycelium waited for rain.

Helene twirled until she fell

in a flail of water

and a grapple of wind.

Somewhere, the tables are smashed.

There is no one

to sit in the chairs.

Somewhere mushrooms puff

like grounded clouds,

draw fairy rings shaped

to a hurricane’s eye.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

A poem birthed by today's prompt, and the news all around us.

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A conversation with a student’s mother,

Palestinian natives who watch in horror

as their homeland is obliterated

by the masters of war.

They, like my Jewish, Lebanese and Ukrainian friends,

have lost family or had them go “missing.”

An ominous description that foreshadows the truth.

Each one lost is another broken heart,

each missing person a hole in another’s life,

each new attack a rain of death

that no gentle words can heal.

I turn away from the death and destruction

only to see flooded cities, battered homes

and broken persons caught in nature’s fiery retribution

for the extraction, the pillaging and the disregard.

Helplessness drapes me in sadness and grief;

A paralysis of resignation hampers my actions.

How long will this madness go on?

In this small moment, alone for a time

in a quiet sanctuary,

all I can do is pray.

Send whispers of love that no shields can detect.

Ring a bell for freedom that ears may hear,

a promise to insure my resistance

is a cataclysmic revolution of the values

we have known.

War begets war,

violence brings more violence,

destruction a cousin of death.

Love is a witness to a force more powerful

than any machinery concocted by the military madness,

rippling out into the universe, one heart at a time,

until each stone becomes a mountain,

each ocean a safe harbor for us all

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