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Keith Aron's avatar

I'm tired and a bit loopy. Without further ado, here is my offering.

Turn around,

don’t drown!

So proclaimed

the mini matrix message board

as it dripped rain

for what seemed surely

at least The 40th day.

What a glib way

to warn one off

from potentially violent death.

I thought this thought

as I watched traffic

speedily splash past the sign,

apparently undeterred.

A sign of the times.

My thoughts turned to God.

What if he’d been inclined

to command via sign

back in Noah’s times?

Skipped the tedious specificity

about gopher wood and pitch and cubits

instead spitting some dope rhymes,

at just the right times?

Don’t be daft,

Build a raft!

Then,

Stay on the ark,

Don’t disembark!

And, lastly,

Before it’s too late,

Procreate!

This entire riff being

a sign of my mind’s

umbrage with these times.

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Larry Brickner-Wood's avatar

Taking a break from working, this poem came to me. We live in New Hampshire, and every four eyars we are treated to a revolving roster of presidential "hopefuls" traipsing through our cafes, streets, campuses, churches, synagogues and temples, our concerts and sporting events. The New Hampshrie primary has just concluded, and tehy move on whilemany of the signs ar eleft behind. The former President does not do retail politics like we are accustomed to, so now we add rallies at arenas and concert halls and sporting venues that disrupt lives in more ways than one might imagine.

These signs that proliferate for a few months seem like graffiti to me, though perhaps not nearly as illumninating. Hence, this poem came to be.

Necessary? Evils

They arrive again like locusts,

unwelcome guests bursting

the bucolic bubble,

nitpicking weeds that you were sure

you had vanquished.

These political signs arriving

every four years,

blotting the landscape,

barraging our senses,

numbing our minds.

One pronounces “Truth”

as if somehow we all get

what that means.

Another adorned in patriotic fervor,

familiar tug at our childhood wonder.

One claims to make us great, again,

leaving me to ponder

whose great do you mean?

These signs and symbols

that populate our viewsheds

and block our hearts from

what we really need to see.

Football stadium ethos

and soccer style rampage,

the shallowness of their message

overshadows all we need to know.

Winners and losers

stuck in duality;

Beneath the glistening snow

hope waits for its time.

Election over, votes tallied

the rain begins to fall.

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