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Chuck's avatar

so who calls the shots.

To destine the few lucky footprints into follow-worthy everlastingness

while so many other

noble contenders

simply get washed away

by the next wave.

most everybody's got feet.

(happy birthday today to my excellent wife karen and her everlasting footprints)

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Julie Schmidt's avatar

Lisa welcome back. And thank you for your shoreline poem. I love the ocean and collecting shells and rocks along the beach. I felt right at home in your poem. The prompt you gave us brought me to my grandmother. She passed years ago, and I still miss her deeply. I must admit I struggled with this poem. I am sure in part because I wanted it to match my deep love for her. Words just fail at times like this. But here it is anyways...

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She was tall in stature, strong in might.

A self-made woman, not of our time.

Nurturing and raising five healthy youngins,

she grew a family while tilling the garden,

breeding chickens and milking the cow.

From her ardor, platters of vittles were forged.

I know for her appy pie was to die for!

Her husband was a preacher of the Word.

Yet she’s the one who imbibed and knew it!

A seamstress that sewed their lives together.

Vestments for their bodies, warmth for their hearts,

clothing for the many tables, windows, dolls and beds.

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Then in full force her sixth pregnancy arrived.

Taking her robust nature hostage, hiding it away.

With her vitality fading, her might dwindling,

doctors were determined to terminate the gestation.

Yet she knew the seed wanted to draw its first breath.

Requesting a few more moments, even a possibility…

It was the faith of a mustard seed, an invincible will.

Along with tomatoes from her garden, harvested from

the substrate of life itself that fed and saved their lives.

Months later my mother was born into this world.

Amazing to consider, I am here because of her will,

and a few red tomatoes….

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