This week, instead of a poem, I’m offering you the lyrics to a song I just wrote. I don’t know that there are absolute rules distinguishing song lyrics from poems, so maybe I can just call this a poem and a song both? Now you know why it’s rhymier and more repetitive than my usual fare, though . . .
Can the March Be a Dance?
I’m still trying to take this crying and fill an ocean be rocked by its motion I’m here aching for something like awakening a fire that’s all consuming the burning before the blooming They say to pick a lane That’s not my brain that’s not my way Can the march be a dance? Can every step be a wild chance? The sky keeps raining and the ground keeps draining We’re made of flowing not the rocks we’re throwing They say to choose a street then dig in deep oh dig in deep But I don’t see an asphalt line I see a green and branching vine I keep singing to hear my heart ringing Your harm is my harm Your alarm is my alarm They say to pick a lane That’s not my brain That’s not my way Can the journey be a dance? And every step a wild chance? I don’t see an asphalt line I see a green and branching vine I see a green and growing vine I see a green and braided vine
Update - After I posted this, a few of you darlings asked to hear the song. Music is usually a solo and relatively private endeavor for me because I suffer from a strange affliction where as soon as I hit ‘record’ or a person enters the room and shows any sign of paying attention to me, my fingers start tripping all over themselves, which makes picking guitar strings or plucking piano keys a bit of a challenge. I hope you won’t mind a few finger fumbles! Here you go . . .
Photo by Victoria Strukovskaya on Unsplash
The Prompt
Since I went rogue this week and wrote a song instead a poem, I hope you’ll view that as a standing invitation to do the same! Some days are poem days. But other days might be song days or ceramic days or painting days or mud pie days. The more creative we get about how to be creative, the richer life becomes. If you’re doing something that makes your heart sing, and you have no place to share it, consider this a place! I’d love to hear about it. (If you want to share a photo, you’ll need to do that through the chat feature rather than in the comments thread.)
If you’re in poem-writing-mode and would like a prompt to play around with, then I offer you these lines from my song: “I’m still trying to _____” and “I’m here aching for _____.”
What might fill in those blanks for you? Maybe you can make a sprawling list. Or maybe one thing beats over and over like a drum. Notice the vast list of your longings, or notice the laser focus. Take a moment to feel that in your body. Notice where it sits and what sensations come with it.
How does this trying or aching or longing show up in your life? How do you see it reflected/ignored/nourished/denied in your day-to-day life or in the wider world?
Do particular memories, stories, places, or contexts come to mind for you as you sit within your own striving/trying/aching/longing?
Can you let your ache write a poem? Can you let that always trying part of you write a poem? Are their voices any different from your voice? What happens if those voices come together and speak at once?
I look forward to reading whatever poem (or song, or flash fiction, or MadLib) emerges from this. Thank you for holding space for the things I create. And thank you for sharing your own creations!
Lisa, you are amazing! Your song is just wonderful! Now, we need to put music to it so we can hear you singing! I believe song lyrics often are quite poetic, and yours fits the crossover criteria for sure! Bravo for you for branching off into the songwriting genre, and inviting us to do the same! 🧡
This is what came out of coffee on my deck this morning, with a coyote barking ceaselessly uphill.
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A Coyote Tries to Get our Attention
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I’m still trying to tell the truth
from up here, where there is no
fir to feather the horizon,
where I can see the sheer
lurching rock of it.
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All winter I keened for you
but you misheard, smiling,
calling it the sound of the stars.
To you I am curio, cameo,
soft backing track.
You’d sooner listen to a dog.
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So finally, today, I am barking.